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Petra
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"...I mean, the way it is now, you're taking the same risk as robbing a bank. No, fuck that, you're taking more of a risk. Guild banks, they're under orders not to stop you in any way. Leave it to the skyguard - they're insured, why should they give a fuck?. You don't even need a sword in a Guild bank these days. I heard a story of a man, walking into a bank down by the Street of Spicers with a letter saying he had a hostage..."

Petra feels the transcript of the conversation tapped against her leg. She reaches for a bao. Her hand trembles ever-so-slightly. "No. We can't get up yet. We make a sudden move, and we'll get plugged first." Petra breathes hard, and speaks quickly, softly. "I just need a second."

It's easy to talk about danger, and say that you'll laugh in its face. Petra has seen greater fears than a robber, and survived. She has thought long hours about violence in the abstract - she's prepared for it, she's considered it, she's even accepted it as a possibility. She has even done violence before!

But to actually sit there, and feel it hot on your neck. To consider, in detail, the reality of facing down life and death, that is another thing. The leap between deciding someone should be hurt and actually hurting them... it makes Petra's skin crawl every time. And to know she is in danger, sitting right where she is...

Her hand shakes just enough for Knife to see. She takes an uneasy bite of a bao, and tries not to think about her odds of taking a bullet to the chest, just to be the example.

"...so you want to rob banks?"

"No, I'm just illustrating that it would be easier than what we've been doing. No more liquor stores. Besides, it's not the giggle it used to be, too many foreigners - they hardly speak fucking common! You tell them 'hand over your coin' and they don't know what you're saying - you have to kill them."

"I don't want to kill anyone," the man in red replies. Petra's hands curl in anger in the tablecloth. How dare he.

"I don't either. Which is why we're here, shortass. Nobody every robs restaurants. Why not? Bars, dispensaries, caravanserai - they're expecting to get robbed. You'll get your head cut off robbing one of them. But restaurants? Insured, worked by plebs, and with so many fat wallets to steal. We'll make more on the wallets than the register. Now, you ready?"

Petra tenses. She needs more time, wanted more time. She opens her mouth to tell Knife, warn him, but before she can, there is the scraping of chairs, the brandishing of swords and guns, and that terrifying, familiar shout.

"Alright everyone, be calm, this is a robbery! Anyone move, and I'll execute every last one of you!"
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Knife
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Knife stared at Petra as she sat there, trembling, and he realized how truly serious the matter was. But after she told Knife not to move, she said nothing. Just looked terrified, and he had no idea what she was listening to, observing. He couldn't pick up the same things she was.

And then it happened. Just as she called it - guns, where did they get guns? They must have been experienced enough to afford them. Knife had knives, but that was nothing against swords and guns. And he couldn't do anything about it. His eyes left the men and he scanned for the small chance that any Sky Guard had miraculously come nearby, but it seemed that the duo was smarter than that.

He also didn't want anyone to get killed. He wasn't a hero, by any means, and he also didn't bring all his money everywhere he went. A couple gold coins, at most, and usually more silver or copper than anything else. He wasn't losing much by getting robbed. He mumbled to Petra, but did not look at her.

"I think we just need to let it happen. I can't..." He couldn't do anything to help. Maybe someone else could. The rest of the patrons, however, looked just as scared as they did. The very same waiter who had kept his eye on Petra for most of their visit stood stock still. Knife didn't know anything about guns except that they were expensive, but now he wished he did. Maybe then he could figure something out. He slowly crawled his hand over the table to Petra and touched her arm, and whispered again. "It's okay, Petra."

The men were close enough to them that he figured they'd be one of the first few people to be shaken down. His mind raced, but nothing came. Was there anything they could do but to just give them their money? Anything Petra could do with her magics?
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Petra
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The robbers disgust her. Not because of their crime itself, not at all. Petra has little inherent respect for the law, nor any particular rancor for those who break it. She grew up on the fringes of society, a criminal by her birth and a criminal by her survival. She broke bread (on the rare days she could eat it) with pickpockets and thugs, and sat on the laps of scavengers and smugglers. It is not the crime that disgusts her.

It is that they are doing it to her.

Consciously, she knows she is insane to think this way. Who is she to them? A nameless face in the crowd, the same as anyone else. Even if they saw her in her full regalia, what would they think? No doubt they would peg her as a mediocre mage, in the fledgling opening of her career. They would be right in that assessment.

But rationality, like the law, sleeps when swords awaken. The gun is pointed at her. The protagonist. The queen of her story, and these people would do her the ignominy of asking her to submit to them, to surrender, to just give up? It would an admission of weakness. It would be an admission of defeat.

I crawled my way from the sewers to stand here, I clawed my way up, I bound demons and sacrificed everything, and now they ask me to submit?

Petra's breath comes hot. It is a rare thing to see her angry. She is angry at the robbers, and at herself. The criminals work their way from table to table, snatching wallets quickly and efficiently, while one shakes down the workers for the safe combination.

I shouldn't. It's stupid. Risk my life for what? A few silvers and a shred of pride? Idiocy. Lunacy. You're better than this, Petra!

She might have been, once. But when she considers handing over her money, she feels the tightening in her chest. It is a warning. It is the squeezing of phantasmal chains around her soul. To give in would be to put pragmatism before her ambition. It would be to show restraint. And she gave that restraint up.

The sting in her heart tells her one thing. That if she gives up without a fight, Yesod will crawl through reality and cut her head off. Those were the terms she made, lost in an imaginary hell. There is no breaking them now.

"You two - gold out, nice and slow. Hands where I can see them." His shortsword flicks between Knife and Petra. He is one of the three robbers, and the most wild-looking. Petra bites her tongue, hard. Her mouth fills with blood. She opens it, and blood runs down her face before boiling away to ether.

The robber opens his mouth to shout a warning, or perhaps a question. He doesn't get the word out. Petra summons Endaemon, Bird of Ten Thousand Faces. Right in his throat, as far back as she can see.

The six-winged bird pulls itself into reality right in the man's windpipe. She can see his throat bulge as he begins to choke on a demon. Blood runs down Petra's chin, and the man stumbles back, shortsword dropped, hands clutching his throat, clawing at it vainly to try and dislodge the demonic bird that has now thoroughly wedged itself in his neck.

Petra wipes the blood from her mouth when she hears a strangled scream from the wiry thief. Endaemon never liked to be caged. No doubt he has started pecking.
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Title: Conscript of the Dead Legion
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1523
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1528
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1532

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Petra

Lores: (8 Requested, 12 Eligible)
Summoning: Subtle Summons
Summoning: Information Gathering
Rhetoric: Hostage Situation
Persuasion: Petty Criminals
Persuasion: De-escalation
Etiquette: Petty Criminals
Acting: Poker Face
Acting: Feigning Control

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A

Points: 8, 5 for Summoning (Summoning [Apprentice])

Comments: It's a shame this thread was never finished, but I loved the game Petra and Knife were playing, and the dialogue was presented as both easy and natural.

I did not give full points for magic as the actual amount of magic used was small in comparison to the level of skill and the experience of the story.


Knife

Lores: (0 Requested, 11 Eligible)

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A

Points: 8, no magic as none was requested

Comments: Marked as temporarily retired at time of review submission.
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