Birds of Prey. [Florian]

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Torin Kilvin
Posts: 750
Joined: Wed Dec 16, 2020 12:54 am
Title: Runesmith
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1062
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?t=4448


R E V I E W


Lore:
Florian:
Deception:
Letting Someone Win
Telling a Half-Truth

One-Handed: Blades:
Proper Stance with a Saber
How to Parry
Watch Your Opponent's Eyes

Psychology:
Overcoming Fear
Everything's a Competition
Bottling Up Thoughts for Later

Resistance:
Taking a Hit to the Chest
Taking a Hit to the Face
Tactics:
Using Words as a Distraction

Unarmed:
Pinning Someone
Keeping Someone Pinned
Proper Stance for a Fistfight
Watching for Feints
Moving to Avoid a Direct Hit

Eitan
Leadership:
When to Expect Unquestioning Obedience

Blades:
Showing How Choreography Fits Into Battle
Where Your Feet Should Be
Where Your Hands Should Be
Watching Your Opponent's Eyes for Clues
Anticipating Their Next Move
Correcting Stance

Hand-to-Hand:
Utilizing the Whole Body
How to Throw a Punch
Rolling With a Fall
Misdirection
Taking Instruction
Taking Advantage of Confusion
Pinning an Opponent
Flipping Someone Off You

Points: 8 each, not to be used for magic

Injuries/Ailments: Minor bruises from sparring

Loot: None

Notes: Well, ehem. *loosens shirt collar* The tension is palpable in here, I'm gonna need some air.
The connection and its antagonistic nature between these two is exceptional! Delightfully played out. I would say I looked forward to part two but I've already read it ;)

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