Amaterasu - Companion NPC (Aegis)

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Amaterasu Haifen

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Name: Amaterasu Haifen
Race: Neptori
DoB: Glade 25 104
PoB: A remote Neptori village in the crystal sea
Title: Bodyguard
Skills:
Elementalism: 50
Traversion: 50
Blades (Katana): 50
Acrobatics: 25
Bodybuilding: 25
Detection: 25
Running: 25
Additional Info:
Amat is a Neptori who grew up in a remote village underneath the crystal sea. There was a massive storm one day when he was young and he happened to be where he oughtn't have been. Aura’s father, Sin, was mid-journey on a business trip when he spotted Amat’s body floating on some debris. After being rescued, Amaterasu took a while to recover his memories. During his recovery, he decided he quite enjoyed Sin’s company and realized he had a lot to learn about the world.

Amat ended up sticking with Sin even after recovering his memories and acted as a servant to him, as repayment for saving his life. Sin didn’t treat him poorly and even allowed him to live in his home and get the same education as his children. Still, he wasn’t treated like a child. He was always an employee, a servant, and eventually a bodyguard. Amat didn’t mind, especially since the pay was good and he was doing more with his life than he ever would have done as a simple villager.

Amat became a mage on his travels with Sin, ultimately taking on both Elementalism and Traversion as they assisted him in both protecting his employer and helping him travel. His use of these magics pre-disaster was never used within city limits and only within the confines of his job, although he did obtain the appropriate licensing.

Then came Sin’s assassination. Amat felt wracked with guilt over his failure to protect him, even though there was little he could do about poison. He had the option to start a new life, but he decided the best thing he could do was to devote himself to protecting the rest of Sin’s family. It was only because of Amat’s efforts that Aura and two of her siblings survived the disaster that struck Zaichaer. His full time job is currently protecting Aura and doing his best to keep her out of trouble.
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The skill points will need adjusted a bit. The rule in lore states "Companion NPC's begin play with a pool of 250 XP. Companion NPC's can begin with (3) Journeyman Skills." This NPC has 4 Journeyman skills. Please adjust this to conform with the rule.

The rest of the character is approved. I would maybe recommend a different font color as it is pretty rough on the eyes with the level of brightness.

Make the above change and drop a comment in this thread to move it forward.
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Done! Removed one journeyman skill and added two apprentice ones. Also swapped masquerade for another magic since Rune said that'd get him killed.

The NPC template had that color in it. That should probably be changed cause I agree, it's an eyesore >_<
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Approved, added to Character Secrets. Add this link to your CS.
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