City Development (Gelerian Imeprium)

[Benedikt]

Hello,

I would like to request on feedbacks and comments on city development project in the Gelerian Imperium. Writeup of the city for dev could be found in this link viewtopic.php?t=5713

Thank you

[Mirage]

Hey!

I apologize for the long wait on this. Nano, then the holidays had be tied up for quite a bit.

To start I would like to say this city really fits the theme of Tranal! I like it a lot actually, and I do not think anything really needs to be changed. If anything you could do with expanding it a little bit. Here are my suggestions:

1. Add something in there to give a general idea of what part of Tranal the city is located. Most locations currently used IC are in the southern part of Tranal if that helps give you a place to start.
2. If you go with a more remote area, consider adding an airship port to the locations of interest, especially if it ends up in a mountainous area
3. This city sounds like a place for the rich to enjoy themselves, so you can splurge a bit more on opulence I think. Possibly even add a note that it is a favorite place for the Imperial Family to visit?

Beyond these suggestions I like it! Feel free to expand on it as much as you like from here

Also if you do not mind, please use this box code for the location itself. I need to go back and add it to the instructions so that locations maintain a level of cohesiveness.

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