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Stefan Dornkirk
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Title: Lord Dornkirk
Location: Zaichaer
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Brenner somehow seemed to keep his composure no matter the situation. Even as Stephan struggled with his own his admiration welled for his brother and it gave him strength in turn. He must live up to Brenner not shame him by expressing weakness in public.

As the party moved on Stephan nodded, once, decisively. "Of course, you need have no fear, the culprits of the attack were caught and dealt with for their crimes. Massacre is the language of the mages in Zaichaer." He couldn't keep the contempt from his voice, even if he kept it from being directed at the ambassador.

After the shock wore off, though he would not have appreciated know it, his mind began running along similar lines to those of the prince. The timing of the accident and the miraculous nature of the failure of all the safety precautions stretched coincidence to its limit. It did not seem as though the incident had been intended to damage the Imperium, or even the Dornkirks themselves. It just didn't make sense to kill one random worker. A massive accident that killed many might have made the city-state seem as though it did not care for its people, but a single failure of what could be proven to be extensive protections wouldn't cause an international incident.

It seemed more likely that the situation had been manufactured to do damage to the prince. If their father had been present the afternoon would certainly have gone differently. The prince would have been removed, by force if he refused to leave, and the city would be ringing with the story of how an innocent worker had been attacked against his will by the Kalzasian ambassador himself. Society would have been polarized quickly over it, underground mages and their supporters would have lauded the rescue while the government would have had to choose between pacifying the majority of the population by punishing Talon or avoiding political issues with the powerful magically based city he represented. The implications were staggering and there were several moments when Stephan had to stumble through explanations he made by route several times every week.

As off balance as he was, Stephan found himself genuinely flattered by the compliments his work was receiving. It really was a great pity Talon had been born as he was. In another world, the two might have made strides of progress working together. But this was the real world, not an ideal one, so the elder Dornkirk pulled himself together, dismissing fancies and worries alike as they entered the drawing-room. Dienerin was there to subtly slip Stephan a note and stand watch over the two other servants who served the refreshments. Taking the moment that Talon was receiving his drink to glance at the note he was informed that the worker was in the custody of the Order of Reconciliation and a report of the incident had been delivered both to the Order and the government.

Stephan placed the note into Brenner's hand before accepting his own cup with a pleasant smile for the serving girl. He took a sip immediately, wondering if in a city of disorder his guests might fear poison. The question, once posed, surprised Stephan and a small frown creased his face. It was the sort of thing they asked you in the Military Academy. He suspected that the sort of answer his teachers had been looking for would not be right with the ambassador.

He looked at Brenner briefly but then turns his attention back to the prince.

"We are one." The statement was simply made and more powerful for it. Though, after a moment, he did go on to explain,

"Our people faced extinction and when that happened we came together. It became our foundation. Whatever hardship or complications we face we do so as a unit, willing to sacrifice the personal for the good of the whole. Even when it's painful and difficult everyone accepts that our survival, our ability to thrive as a society, depends on working together."

It was true to Stephan, entirely. Whether it was true in reality or not he believed it to his soul. The poignance of his words, almost as if he was daring anyone to argue with him hung in the air until he tilted his head a little to one side and said tone all amusement now,

"And the beer, have you tried it? Best you'll ever have."

He waited to let Brenner make his own answer before bouncing the question back to Talon. "Since we're being personal, I would like to know what it is you love about your home?"
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Brenner Dornkirk
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Title: First Minister of the State of Zaichaer
Location: Zaichaer
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Now that Brenner had been assigned to a diplomatic role, he began to think like a diplomat and that meant he was hyper-focused on language. In 'The Art of the Possible' language was more textured than one might expect in the military, where brevity and clarity were paramount in high pressure situations. Politics represented a slower, more deliberate animal than the armed forces. Two points of nuance were not lost on Brenner.

The first point that irked him was the mitigation Talon slipped into his apology. Rather than simply hearing and accepting his wrongdoing for the threat it represented, he had to slip in that it was done with benevolent intent. Which was, in Brenner's mind, immaterial. Irreparable harm had been done to the man he'd blithely ensorcelled. He would not go on working here, and it was altogether likely that his reputation would be blemished by this incident rendering it impossible to find work elsewhere. There were those who fell on their swords over less.

The second point that struck Brenner was Talon's reference to magic-users as 'the Gifted'. That was a troubling term. It spoke to the exact reason that Brenner most detested magic- that it created an unnatural imbalance. That it was 'gifted' to people with no regard for their merits and that it created an ersatz hierarchy. If Talon thought of mages as being 'gifted', then what did he consider Brenner and Stefan? Less than. Brenner was to Talon as a cripple was to him. The fledgling diplomat suppressed a snarl at the notion.

"Thank you for understanding, Highness." He said through clenched teeth, but smiling lips. With that unpleasantness behind them, he placed his hand on Stefan's back- a fortifying gesture, as his brother answered the pointed question posed by the prince. Brenner nodded approvingly at the patriotic reply, breaking into peels of laughter at the final addendum about the beer. Shaking his head as the chortles subsided, he composed his own response.

"I must agree with Stefan. It is our singularity of purpose that makes Zaichaer great. Ours are not a soft nor a complacent people. Most of us share a common desire to see to the needs of the majority. To promote equality," He was deliberate with that word choice, given Talon's talk of 'The Gifted' earlier, "And snuff out injustice. The is a general understanding that true patriots are not strangers to sacrifice and that duty demands unpleasantness, but that we take on burdens today so that future generations need not endure the same hardships. Pain can be an investment instead of merely a nuisance..." He trailed off, and tilted his head as Stefan turned the question back round on the prince, curious as to how the foreign dignitary might reply.

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"I have set my life upon a cast,
And I will stand the hazard of the die."
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Finn
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Location: Kalzasi
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Experience: 8 xp, but no magic.

Lore:
Brenner

Deception
Making excuses for others
Feinting toward safer subject matter

Investigation
Disarming with humour

Leadership
Sharpens his focus under pressure
Proffering direct chastisement of his social betters

Politics
Managing expectations
Employing textured language
Masking bigotry
Bonding with rivals over commonalities
Managing crises with aplomb

Stefan

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Talon

Etiquette: Using a backhanded compliment as means of apologizing
Leadership: Signaling entourage to maintain poise in the face of tension
Leadership: Defusing tension with well-placed tact
Leadership: Using compliments to invite easy relations
Linguistics: Recognizing a Kathalan accent
Politics: Navigating prejudice with poise
Politics: Distracting from tension by tacking on to less divisive topics
Politics: Complimenting one nation without insulting another
Semblance: Brenner Dornkirk’s Aura
Semblance: Stefan Dornkirk’s Aura

Injuries: N/A

Loot: N/A

Note: Sassy boys being sassy. Now kiss. I mean, just kidding. As you were. Nothing to see here. Well done.
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we keep on churning and the lights inside the house turn on
and in our native language, we are chanting ancient songs
and when we quiet down, the house chants on without us
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