R E V I E W
Lore:
Finn:
Mesmer:
Am I Reading This Right?
Explaining the Symphony
Guided Meditation
Used as Enhancement to Watching Plays
Picking Out Specific Feelings
As a Teaching Aid
Harmonizing
Listening to Multiple Symphonies at Once
Recognizing Arousal
Teaching Techniques
Calming Panic
Giving Comfort
Maintaining a link
Singing:
Phonation
Composition:
Compromises
Arvalyn:
Mesmer
Maintaining aetherial link with common Rune
Imparting strong emotion
Imparting nuance through symphony
Reading multiple symphonies
Influencing multiple symphonies
Sharing common feelings
Using another Mesmer as a focus
Awareness of influence
Learning from other Mesmers
Amplifying emotion
Communicating through symphonies
Allowing his own symphony to be manipulated
Seduction
Mesmer-enhanced flirtation
Trusting a partner
Negotiating terms of a relationship
Points: 8 each, can be used for Mesmer by both participants
Injuries/Ailments: Possibly dangerous accelerated attachment if intense use of Mesmer continues to this level.
Loot: Boyfriends??? (teasing)
Notes: I appreciate that both of you let magic affect your characters so fully and write it out. In my experience, I have run into writers who, especially when their characters are also mages, play as though magic has little or no effect on them, so this is as refreshing as it is entertaining. I'm looking forward the seeing how deep a hole these two dig for themselves.