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Re: "Warm Smiles Do Not Make You Welcome Here" [Rickter]

Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2021 12:47 pm
by Brenner Dornkirk
Brenner blinked at the counter to his objection. A snarl curled his lip- unconsciously wolf-like in the presence of a lupine Rathari. He was not one to suffer the resistance of some sub-human trash when he only sought to carry out the will of the State. He reached for his side-arm and closed his fingers about the grip. Or he would have, had there been a grip to be closed about.

He gasped, realising that his faculties had been compromised through sorcery. Goosepimples sprung up all over his skin as the chill resultant of that knowledge swept over him like a tsunami. His skin prickled, he thought, because of the unearthly violation that was being dealt him- Not because of his all too rational fear of the same. It was only after processing this, that he saw his weapon in the hands of another.

The expression in Brenner Dornkirk's eyes as he regarded the scene before him was fitting to his name, as it might be translated from the original Gelerian. Amidst the icy blue of his iris churned a furnace burning hate for those who had just compromised his purity. He had (at least to his knowledge) never been touched by magic hitherto that moment, and it stripped him of something precious to him- a point of pride in his State sanctioned prejudice. He couldn't even form the words to curse these violators, but his violent visage said more than any utterance of the tongue could hope to relate.

The pursuant injury was the worse, though he only had a moment to process it before its Mesmeric effects took hold and softened his demeanour. Part of him cried out within, but it was muffled. He met the eyes of the creature who chucked his chin. But no- Creature no longer felt apropos, so his thoughts amended it to 'woman' as her magicks softened his feelings toward her for the nonce.

He turned back to the bar and seated himself to await a fresh drink.

FIN

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Re: "Warm Smiles Do Not Make You Welcome Here" [Rickter]

Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2021 10:38 am
by Reviewer
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Brenner Dornkirk

Lores: (10 Requested, 11 Eligible)

Deception: Concealing distaste
Deception: Behaving cavalierly
Deception: Managing facial expressions
Deception: Minding his tone
Deception: Omitting details to shape narrative
Deception: Turning insults into jokes
Investigation: Remaining clear-minded through anger
Investigation: Assessing a dangerous scenario
Investigation: Recognising magic abuse
Investigation: Sharpening senses with rage

Loot: -1 Sidearm, -1 Ricky
Injuries: Brenner lost his enchantment virginity by being manipulated magically and he is not happy about it.

Points: 8 (No Magic)

Comments: Poor Brenner! Never fun to have magic inflicted on you. What a lovely thread, it was great seeing the match ups of opposing personalities from even more opposing cultures, yet still finding some common ground. Well done!


Ricky

Lores: (0 Requested, 10 Eligible)
Navigation: Picking Out Distinct Locations To Remember
Navigation: Learning How To Tread New Territory
Navigation: Following Your Rathari Nose
Etiquette: Remaining Cordial With Foreign Dignitaries
Tactics: Withholding A Certain Amount of Information From A Likely Enemy
Rhetoric: The Curious Way Talon Makes 'Friends'
Rhetoric: Necessity Is The Mother of Invention
Logistics: Questioning The Gesture of A Free Drink
Rhetoric: How It Feels To Shift Between Rathari Forms
Poison: Magebane And Its Effects

Zaichaer: The Red Dragon Inn
Personal: Conversing With A Zaichaeri Official
Personal: Poisoned With Abjinurium

Loot: None requested
Injuries: None requested

Points: 8 (no magic as none was requested)

Comments: Rickter needs time to figure out his lores, but told me to go ahead and post this for review in the meanwhile. He'll send his lores privately to whomever reviews it.
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