Re: Taking It in the Back [Torin]
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2021 6:39 pm
Name: Aurin
Name: Torin
Comment: These are the threads that feed more into the spice of life here in Kalzasi, I always love seeing the general interactions combined with atmosphere of the settings they use. Aurin I whole-heartedly love the mentality and mood of your writing, it fits almost unbelievably well with the locations your using. Both of you are wonderful and descriptive, and the thread progression feels organic and natural when its read.
The only thing I had to remark upon were the lores themselves; Aurin I kinda figured what your lores were and improvised with the layout, but Torin I honestly wasn't sure what skills you wanted to cater towards. Which is why I decided to create a bit of a guide you can refer to for future requests, it's not necessary mind you, just something that can make the process of reviewing easier for all parties involved down the line!
Welp, that's everything I'm sure! If you have any questions, or feel that something actually was missed; please do pm me so we can talk!
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Name: Torin
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Comment: These are the threads that feed more into the spice of life here in Kalzasi, I always love seeing the general interactions combined with atmosphere of the settings they use. Aurin I whole-heartedly love the mentality and mood of your writing, it fits almost unbelievably well with the locations your using. Both of you are wonderful and descriptive, and the thread progression feels organic and natural when its read.
The only thing I had to remark upon were the lores themselves; Aurin I kinda figured what your lores were and improvised with the layout, but Torin I honestly wasn't sure what skills you wanted to cater towards. Which is why I decided to create a bit of a guide you can refer to for future requests, it's not necessary mind you, just something that can make the process of reviewing easier for all parties involved down the line!
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Welp, that's everything I'm sure! If you have any questions, or feel that something actually was missed; please do pm me so we can talk!