Gods I've Never Served [Thysbae]

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Title: Conscript of the Dead Legion
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1523
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1528
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1532

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Thysbae

Lores: (15 Requested)
Deception: Playing up on assumptions
Detection: Noticing the expression of distaste
Detection: The signs of someone of perverse nature
Etiquette: Accepting advice given to you
Etiquette: Properly greeting someone of a higher rank
Medicine: How not to handle a medical emergency
Persuasion: Asserting your innocence
Politics: Loyalty may not be obvious based on appearance
Politics: Patriotism
Psychology: Be wary of everyone whose intentions you don't know
Psychology: Everyone loves an airman
Psychology: Intimate relations with humans are considered perverse when you're not human
Psychology: Sometimes humans are just mean
Rhetoric: Changing conversation topics through tone
Tactics: Emulating someone's stance

Loot: Bae made a new friend! (debatable)
Injuries: N/A

Points: 8 (No magic)

Comments: Well, this was a most interesting way for Bae to make a friend, of sorts. I am addicted to Bae's curiosity, naivety, and yet still maintains the fervent loyalty to the state. Well done.


Brenner

Lores: (15 Requested)

Investigation:
Analysing speech patterns
Inquiring after background information
Gathering data
Assessing threats
Exercising due diligence around strange creatures
Acquiring information through friendly banter
Exploiting common interests

Medicine:
Diagnosing choking symptoms
Administering first aid
Assessing emergencies
Gathering health data
Referring patients to professionals

Navigation:
Locating government agencies
Guiding strangers through Zaichaer proper
Familiarity with geography of the Fatherland

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A

Points: 8 (No magic)

Comments: A Brenner, the man of Zaichaeri men. A true exemplar. I particularly like how you display both his prejudices and his good manners in a symbiotic tandem. Well done, and I cannot wait to read more about Zaichaer's Best.
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