Jaakuna Me

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Siorey
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Title: The Boy with the Eldritch Tattoo
Location: Kalzasi, Karnor
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1219
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1226
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1290

₪ Ja'akuna Me ₪

Sphere: Eldritch
Rank: Lesser
Length of Contract: Seasonal
Disposition:
  • Calm and collected, the Ja'akuna Me is a terrifying and scholarly entity as they see most if not all mortals as subject to study, primarily what mortals fear. This makes them intrusive towards those they encounter, including their summoner. One would note that they always feel as if the Ja'akuna Me is judging their every action, which in most cases they are, mentally archiving it. Communicating with these spirits can be frustrating at times as they seldom speak, and when they do, it's in cryptic tones and riddles.

Abilities
  • Eldritch Sting: The Ja'akuna is able to control a small amount of electrical discharge in relatively close proximity to themselves. This discharge is limited to a single shock that can travel 10 feet before dissipating. The shock in terms of feeling is that akin to what one would receive from static electricity, which causes foes to stumble.

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These abilities are too powerful for a Lesser spirit.
Lesser spirits are stronger than minor spirits but not by much. They are typically entities with one to two paranormal abilities that are usually fairly generalized. (i.e. a celestial capable of levitating or a nature spirit capable of rousing their element to bothersome levels)
The Eldritch Ray is more appropriate to a Moderate level spirit.

Nightmare Gaze is more appropriate to a Moderate level spirit. Compounding effects, invading an individual's mind, gleaning what their worst fears are at a glance, producing a stun effect, are powers more befitting something more powerful. Please reassess.

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Title: The Boy with the Eldritch Tattoo
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Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1219
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1226
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1290

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