Bird Song [Eitan]

High City of the Northlands

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Jane Farraway
Posts: 81
Joined: Tue Jun 01, 2021 7:49 pm
Location: Zaichaer
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1609
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1664

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Florian

Lores:

Aether Siphoning
Bolstering Wards Slowly
Draining Wards Slowly
Physiological Effects of Advanced Aether Siphoning

Charisma
Deception: Acting Casual
Deception: Using a Joke to Conceal Feelings
Etiquette: Delivering Uncomfortable News
Etiquette: Nobles Can Be Cruel
Etiquette: Using a Joke to Make Suggestions
Intimidation: Using Your Anger

Endurance
Running: Burning Off Nervous Energy

Mercantilism
Cooking: Assisting a Chef
Cooking: Setting a Table
Cooking: Small and Even Cuts

Perception
Psychology: Controlling Your Anger
Psychology: Internal Sense of Worth

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Exp: 5xp non-magical, 3xp magical

Eitan

Lores:
Politics:
Words Need Not Match Expression
Suits as Armor
Family Diplomacy
Answers That Sidestep
Thinking on Your Feet
Ease in Low Company
Graciously Accepting Invitations
Proper Guest Behavior

Leadership:
Making Plans for Underlings
Giving Orders
Expressing Expectations
Patience
Recognizing Pride
Using Anger to Relieve Anxiety

Spycraft:
Pitching a Voice Not to Be Heard

Loot: N/A
Injuries: N/A
Exp: 5xp non-magical, 3xp magical

Comments: Sorry, Eitan, I couldn't heed your warning about Ava. She and Florian had such a sweet relationship (condolences). The interactions between Eitan and Florian were great to see as they try to figure out their relationship outside of their duties. Seeing how you both described warding and aether siphoning was very interesting and it really helped to show how they complement each other. Considering how both uses were only minor exhibitions and the majority of the thread was more focused on interpersonal relationships, I feel I can only give 3 points of magical experience, but it was a fantastic read and I look forward to see how Eitan's and Florian's dynamic evolves.

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