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Zora
- Posts: 119
- Joined: Sat Jul 29, 2023 9:20 am
- Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?t=4721
- Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?t=4756
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Masagh
- Posts: 193
- Joined: Mon Oct 03, 2022 6:51 pm
- Title: Highborn
- Location: Ecith
- Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?t=3798
- Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?t=3804
- Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?p=21241#p21241
R E V I E W
Points: 8
Injuries/Ailments: None
Loot: None
Notes: I really like your character and the way she interacts with her environment and all these side characters. Your pacing makes your work pull the reader (me) in! Good job!
word count: 93
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